理想的风筝(片段)
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发布时间：2022-04-26 09:30
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热心网友
时间：2022-06-26 19:30
1.风筝不停地在空中飞翔上升。我体会到风筝对天空的渴望，正如刘老师对生活的热爱和追求一样。
2.表达出刘老师内心的快乐，他的脸上充满甜蜜的笑容，就好像要溢出来一样，生动而传神。让我感受到了刘老师似乎返老还童，身上散发出朝气蓬勃的活力。
3.坚强勇敢地站起来吧，你们永远是生活的强者！
这些问题老师都没怎么细讲，差不多就是这样了，不过有些词语可能搭配不恰当，需做进一步修改。
热心网友
时间：2022-06-26 19:30
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